Devin

bring back remember me 

Wow, okay it's been a really long time since I logged onto here. So, uh...
          It's definitely too late to say this now, but I will not be updating any of the stories on here. I've grown a lot as a writer and as a person, and I simply don't like any of them anymore, or at least not enough to want to update them at this point. I have been working on some original stories, I recently used my characters from You and I and changed them some so I could rewrite it from scratch. I honestly don't think I'll ever upload to this profile again though, so sorry. To anyone who'd want to see what I'm currently doing in the anime community, I'd suggest checking out my YouTube channel. I cover the weeb songs. (https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCQYQ0FdcwxFfeN7Ne-F44VA)
          Thank you all for the love you've expressed towards my stories, I appreciate it a lot. Don't worry, I'll keep writing. Just not here.

Alright, I know it's late to say this, but I may not be updating much for a while. School keeps me busy now, and I'm hoping on starting up a webcomic based off my original story, You and I (title will likely change). Hopefully all will work out well.
          
          Other Updates/Announcements:
          
          You and I will still likely be updated every once in a while, but be warned that I will likely change the title.
          
          
          Remember Me [GerIta] will likely not update again. I know the demand for it, but I ran into a wall completely, and I probably should have stopped at chapter 4 or 6 anyways.
          
          My Spamano fanfic will most likely not be updated again.
          
          My JeanMarco fic, The Awkward Life, will update again eventually when I have time (and the right mindset) to write it.
          
          Connection, my Mirai Nikki fic with OCs, will probably update again at some point, but I don't know when that may be.
          
          So, sorry and thanks for putting up with me this long! ^^;
          
          Your friendly neighborhood homosexual,
          
          DrAdipose

DUDE
          PLEASE JUST WRITE ALL THE POTENTIAL FICS PLEEASSSSSSEEEEEE TOO PLEASE
           OER TET TOETTTTTT

Heroes of Olympus AND Free!!!?!?!?! yuuuuusssss

I got a Wattpad like you wanted me too. I put my Creepy Pastas on here only doe.

The first chapter of my new JeanMarco fanfic, titled "The Awkward Life," has been published! It has two POVs, both Jean's and Marco's. This Attack on Titan high school AU fumbles between awkward romances and teenaged oddities.

Okay, I may not be able to update any more of my GerIta fanfic until I get back from vacation in two weeks. In the meanwhile, I would love to encourage people who haven't read my Mirai Nikki fic, Connection, to read it. It hasn't been getting as much love, even though I find it better than my Spamano one. Almost all the characters are OCs, and there's yaoi, so if you're not in the fandom, it doesn't matter too much. I would really appreciate more reads for this one, since I'm fairly proud of it so far... K thanks bye I don't mean to brag or anything I just thought it deserved more reads ehhhh >///<

Heyoo devin
          Let's start with Connection. I le give it le 4.6/5.0, excited where it's going. However...
          -The main character thinks way too often
          -It's starting to get really annoying
          -Use his actions to explain what his mindset is
          -i.e. "gasps in shock" OMG HE GEI
          -Chapter 1 should have been called Prologue, since it's kinda before everything happens and it's a kinda backstory kinda
          -Some of the sentences don't make sense "I felt myself bump into someone right before I fell over" uh you don't say
          -Some minor errors in confusing 3rd person and 1st person
          -Don't use too much compound sentences, use more complex/compound-complex sentences
          -It gets awkward when you use too many of the same sentence
          -More sophisticated vocabulary for the noble people?
          -More details about people: //in italics: He looks tough, ready to confront anyone in his way.  In a sense, that makes him under-confident about his behavior. Wut's rong wit him?"
          
          //le too tired and too critical and too grumpy
          SORRY DEVIN THIS WAS MY ANALYZATION ;A; I APOLOGIZE IF I HURT YOU YOUR STORIES ARE BETTER THAN MINE

I would love if someone commented... I would really appreciate feedback on my stuff. Uguu... Be honest please >.<