DrPlayz

After seeing that Songs of War may be renewed, and the future series be revamped, I thought I'd post some of my work I've been slowly tapping away at since the old days. "A Knight of Ardonia" is not only a story I'm more fond of, but it's original purpose was to create a seperate storyline which held events to overcome my writers block for "The Devonstone", as I was stuck for quite some time on where to go.
          	
          	Currently, AKOA (A Knight of Ardonia) is onto chatper 11 in terms of development, and continues to grow. 
          	
          	Once this has reached a substantial distance, I was rekindle my efforts into reviving The Devonstone, likely reworking most of the initial work to make more sense, and remove a portion of Kelious's overpowered nature (which I rushed due to my want to release a fanfic about SoW)
          	
          	Another time,
          	Mr. Matio

DrPlayz

AKOA Chapter 4 has just released, for some more context. Check it out!
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DrPlayz

After seeing that Songs of War may be renewed, and the future series be revamped, I thought I'd post some of my work I've been slowly tapping away at since the old days. "A Knight of Ardonia" is not only a story I'm more fond of, but it's original purpose was to create a seperate storyline which held events to overcome my writers block for "The Devonstone", as I was stuck for quite some time on where to go.
          
          Currently, AKOA (A Knight of Ardonia) is onto chatper 11 in terms of development, and continues to grow. 
          
          Once this has reached a substantial distance, I was rekindle my efforts into reviving The Devonstone, likely reworking most of the initial work to make more sense, and remove a portion of Kelious's overpowered nature (which I rushed due to my want to release a fanfic about SoW)
          
          Another time,
          Mr. Matio

DrPlayz

AKOA Chapter 4 has just released, for some more context. Check it out!
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DrPlayz

Some time ago, I had written 4 extra chapters for my SoW story "A Knight of Ardonia," which never attention similar to The Devonstone.
          
          This story deviates somewhat from the main storyline of Songs of War, but keeping it on a similar path. Since it's discontinued and David outed, what happens after the war is never discussed.
          
          I stumbled upon these recently, reread them, and would like to post them, as well as continuing to write more if anyone wants to read it, OR, reset the lore and make it my own storyline (if requested)
          
          Like or comment the post to see these.
          
          
          
          *Quick Context*
          
          Falgon Sendaris is an Ardoni-Human hybrid, trained in effective combat techniques by his father in Ataraxia, and becomes a leading figure in the Knights of Ardonia
          
          During this process, he befriends a Jaggathan called "Oliver" (Moncton) and they become close companions rather quickly (as neither have proper friends, or a childhood)
          
          Eventually, when fighting in the second war, both males (M×M) begin understanding that their companionship means more than just friendly faces, but fear of the other disapproving keeps them quiet until the war ends.
          
          Before the war commences, Moncton offers to travel with Falgon across the realm, as Falgon has not once left Ataraxia's borders except for hunting and has never seen the world outside of it.
          
          The rest is yet to be written.
          
          Thoughts?

Ingressus_Voltaris

No offense, but can you please credit my friend who originally made the cover?
          Sorry if I didn't know if she let you use it or not

DrPlayz

@Ingressus_Voltaris It's not actually the cover, it's simply there because there's nothing else as the cover and they don't leave it blank when you publish it
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Ingressus_Voltaris

"A Knight of Ardonia"
            This one
            Again, sorry if she let you use it and I didn't know
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DrPlayz

I assume you mean my pfp?
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DrPlayz

Since I haven't done much in a while, I thought you might want a spoiler and some info on the Devonstone.
          
          The Devonstone is essentially a large source of adrenaline to put it in perspective. When the effects wear off, Kelious's body takes extra toll. Hence why he must find out what power it actually contains. Also, with Davina being put into a coma is a demonstration of this which I didn't explain properly. Kelious was born to endure the Stone's power, but Davina is not, hence why she took a much larger toll when being healed by the Devonstone. 
          
          Also, for those of you who were wondering why the Devonstone has more than one ring floating in the center, is because they aren't rings. They are actually symbols of each different song. The Devonstone itself is a device used to harness the power of all them combined, with an infused DNA code to unlocking it. The reason why the Devonstone isn't recorded in history, is because there was no knowledge of its existence. It dissapeared along with the Devonoris clan, presumably to safeguard it. When/If he meets Galleous, they will research how to unlock the said device, releasing the individual Songs.
          
          Hope that gives you some theories. Be sure to share those with me below! :)
          
          Dr Playz

DeathTron886

@DrPlayz This is really useful and i do have a few theories about what will happen and can you please update "The Devonstone"? It is a really good and i understand that it won't come out immediately but still can you please update or at lest work on "The Devonstone"
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