Drago_Unity

Small paragraph on what I'm working on hesitant to make a full book what y'all think?

Drago_Unity

"We laid in the concrete cell..I held him in my arms tightly.. He lightly snored on my lap it was nice he hadn't slept in days. I starred at his sleepy face pushing a away strands of his wavy black hair away from face. I was happy he looked peaceful.. It was around 11:00p.m the rain poured lightly outside this prison of concrete. I placed my hand on his chest feeling his heart beat it was  fast but then began to slow down at my touch.. "I'm so sorry that u must suffer..I wish I could stop this.."Tiers filled my eyes with words I wasn't ready for this but I had to be here for him. He began squirming his body began to tense in his sleep  he began breathing heavily his face turning sour he cramped up in a little ball then soon began shaking,shaking harshly. I reached out for his hand and held it with my soft touch"