I have been putting this story through peer reviews and I've gotten some good feedback. So I'm going to be adding those notes and edits from the google doc I have into here. This means that some chapters might be split apart, some completely revised, and even one chapter will be removed because it was ripped apart during a peer review. That removed chapter has since been turned into two new chapters. Just thought of letting you guys know. There will still be more modifications to come as I'm still peer reviewing the work I have so far.
