Finally!! After almost 11 years (started writing it properly in year 7, 2004) the first chapter of my first actual attempt at a story is up and done. And for those who are interested its also posted on Scribophile, so please go there and critique it!
I notice people are reading my uploads but please, PLEASE, write a comment or a review before you leave the site. It would mean so much to me to know people's opinions about my work. That doesn't mean it goes in the comments of this post unless its 'I read it and commented.'
Right, now another 10 years for the next chapter, haha ahhh *sulks off to find more coffee*