DrakeRedgrave

@Aluber1800  while making custom cards can be cool, I do recommend you keep it to a minimum(unless you're making something like action cards) since it can be seen as you  trying to make just trying to make op cards and make situations less interesting. 
            
            Also, don't say you're not talented since, regardless, everyone has to start somewhere. You are learning, and there is a difference 

@DrakeRedgrave Well, I was thinking that the otk is wrong and lower reiji standards so I was planning to rewrite the duel part only and maybe make custom D/D cards as well but thanks for not criticism my story as I am not that talented yet 

@Aluber1800 np. So far, it's good. Hopefully, you can update the story soon. However, I do suggest you tone down the "edge" a bit, I think grape might be a bit much. I also wanna mention that I don't think the 1TK against reiji was a great idea since regardless of how you intend to use him, that duel reduces his presence as a strong duelist. 
            
            I do have other pointers/criticisms, but those are my main thoughts. I obviously don't know what your endgame for the story is, so there's no need to do a massive re-write

@DrakeRedgrave I be honest and say the Fate Series and Yugioh stories are my best work.

@ShiningGlory574 what I've read so far is pretty good, nice work, I've got some pointers/constructive criticism but so far we'll done!

@Mrdezznutes maybe some other time, I'm a bit busy, sorry 

@Thornfinna ok and you are most welcome to read any of the stories that I help create 

@Thornfinna I see, I'll keep that in mind for when I start writing 

@DrakeBeowulf That I am  and I like working with authors on Wattpad to create stories that has never been done before