DramaStaged

hahaha thats awesome.
          	
          	and alright its on fictionpress.com
          	(the story link is:    http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2826289/1/All_Hands_On_Deck    )
          	
          	like i said, it so needs editing, lol so sorry if its a little rough. :)
          	thanks! lol and have fun with your dad and all.. thats kinda cool :)

sym113

yes i'd love it for you to give me a link i really want to know what happends to them
          
          p.s sorry for the wait in getting back to you i don't want you to think i didn't post right away is cuse of you or your story it just been one hell of a month 
          
          wood you belave right after i read your story my dad left for two weeks in japan his boss made him go becuse he speeks good english 
          
          ^_^ so hes back now and my work load went down loads :)

DramaStaged

Hey thanks! And actually, I am currently writing the third book in the series.  I have finished this first one, but its under some constructive editing haha something which is DEFINITELY needs. 
          
          I have posted some more of this book on a diff website, and if you want it, I can get you that :)
          if not thats fine. thanks for commenting :)