@Skyhuntress You're story is great! got through it? I practically devoured it. I spend practically the whole day doing nothing but reading it, then when I got through what was posted I sat around for a while wishing that there was another chapter. By far one of the best, most original stories I've read on wattpad yet, and it's definitely up there with P.I.E.
@Draphic Oh wow XD Thank you so, so much for all the votes and stuff: You have no idea how happy I am at the moment haha ^.^
There should be another chapter up by the end of today if all goes well ^.^
@Skyhuntress You're story is great! got through it? I practically devoured it. I spend practically the whole day doing nothing but reading it, then when I got through what was posted I sat around for a while wishing that there was another chapter. By far one of the best, most original stories I've read on wattpad yet, and it's definitely up there with P.I.E.
@Parogar I comepletely agree I don't like the way he uses those "challenges". I think that it isn't because people are losing interest but because they're lazy that they don't vote.
@Parogar Yes I am completely serious, the only real reason that his gets so many votes right out of the gate is 1 His story has been around longer and 2 he sets those challenges. Your story IS better, it just hasn't been around as long, and isn't as well known. I didn't even see the story until last night at ten. I couldn't stop reading it, I was up till 3:30!
@Parogar being completely serious here, I've been reading born of fire almost from the beginning and yours is by far the better book, his is just a bit more off, his chapters are too short and his charecters feel like he's gotten tired of writing about them, but your story is just amazing!
@Parogar wow now I feel like an idiot, I read P.I.E. I just didn't understand the abbreviation... It is the best story that I've ever read on wattpad, and I read a lot of books, very well written and the charecterization you use is amazing. General Harris scares me though...
@Parogar actually I fanned you because of psych investigations which is probably the most well written story that I've seen on wattpad yet, although I do plan on reading P.I.E. soon