WalkingUpsideDown

I dont think i need deus ex machina but i am having some plans for foreshadowing,although the foreshadowing wont ever be direct ,just indirect.

@Drath77 Also, deus ex machina is effective if it is properly set up. I love using it if it's foreshadowed properly.

@Drath77 I am not really good at checking plot holes.  I am more of checking the story structure and mechanics.