Derascene May 13 Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal Saw your post on Reddit. You sure you want a hard critique? View 8 more replies Drath77 I dont think i need deus ex machina but i am having some plans for foreshadowing,although the foreshadowing wont ever be direct ,just indirect. May 14 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal Derascene @Drath77 Also, deus ex machina is effective if it is properly set up. I love using it if it's foreshadowed properly. May 14 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal Derascene @Drath77 I am not really good at checking plot holes. I am more of checking the story structure and mechanics. May 14 • Reply Report CommentLink to CommentCode of ConductWattpad Safety Portal