hi there, thanx for the comment.......i am glad u enjoyed my novel, i kno what u mean, i suppose i do have a habit of rambling when i write, but sometimes i cant help myself i can see them so well when i write and their thoughts become my own......but this is a glitch i am working on, this is only the first draft of the novel, i have yet to make all the revisions i need on it......writers redo their work at least a dozen times before it is of publishable quality and for me this is only the first draft so i kno i have a long way to go yet, thanx for voting even though it is still a work in progress:-)