pastelpearl_

Hie Dear, I am searching for some loyal cutu cutu readers as I have just started a new book called "FROM VENOM TO VOWS"
          
          Would you mind if you check it once... 
          Can you give it a try and support me as well. 
          
          I hope you do read it, and do comments and votes as well... 
          
          It's less an Enemies to Lovers,... More a Haters to Devotees... 
          
          I hope you love it. 
          
          Thankyou soo much! (⁠^⁠^⁠) ❤

DrawnByTime

@pastelpearl_ Sounds interesting!  I'll definitely check it out. Best of luck with your story! If you have some time, I'd really appreciate it if you could visit my story as well. Hope we can support each other.
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moonlight_wrtz

 Hi!  Since you asked me to review your story, I read your first two chapters. I think you have an interesting concept and a good imagination. As a reader, I personally felt a little confused at the beginning because I wasn't sure who the characters were or what was happening. Maybe you could consider adding a small introduction to the characters and the setting before the story picks up. I think it might help readers connect with the story more easily.
          
          I hope you don't mind me sharing my thoughts. They're just my personal opinion as a fellow new writer.  And please don't give up! I also didn't get many views or votes when I first started. It takes time for readers to discover a story. Keep writing, keep learning, and believe in yourself. Wishing you all the very best on your writing journey! ✨

DrawnByTime

@moonlight_wrtz 
            Hi! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review  that means a lot, especially since you didn't have to be this thoughtful about it. You're totally right about the confusion at the start; I just went back and added a short intro to Chapter 1 to ground readers in who Elina and Kael are before the story picks up, so hopefully that helps.
            
            And thank you for the encouragement, genuinely. It's really easy to feel discouraged early on, so hearing that from someone who's been through it too helps more than you'd think.
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