Drawnatsu

Ayo, i finay followed you! Sorry it took so long but im from insta!

I came from insta and i really like your stories!

I've made the layout of my writing more clear.
          
          There's more space between sentences so things don't get too exhausting to read (like this)
          
          The paragraphs are more  separated now.
          
          I've tried looking for SPAG errors to fix them.
          
          If you have any suggestions on how I can make my writing better don't hesitate to let me know :)

Hi guys hope you're all having a good day 
          So I've started writing chapter four of my story but not many people have seen chapter three.
          I assume my story could have gotten a bit dull  and that's okay, maybe it's too simple or there's something about it that people don't like.
          So I'm asking if you guys can help me improve it 
          I'm open to changing it a little and/ or adding/ taking stuff out if necessary so I'd appreciate it if someone gave me some tips 
          Remember to tell your friends about my story and have a nice day