CrimmsonPetals
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Hello! Thank you so much for voting and supporting. It makes me happy that you decided to read my series this far. I noticed your a few books in and I was hoping I could get a little feed back. Anything you feel does or dosent work? Anything you feel about the story that could be cut out and or added too to make the story better? If you have any suggestions I would like to hear them please! Thank you.
CrimmsonPetals
@Dream-feather Thank you for that feedback and I'm glad the story dosent feel too bloated or like it needs to be cut. That makes.me really happy! I am going to go back and edit the errors in the books and probably enlist an editor to help with misspellings and typoes. Thank you again. Cant wait to post more of the Tales soon. Have good day!
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Dream-feather
@CrimmsonPetals Hey! Honestly so far I really like the series, the plot is slowly unveiling and the characters' development is interesting, be it Ezekiel, his family or Brandon. (and I like leopards hehe) . If something didn't make sense, I think that the answer are given later in the books. Maybe just the fact shifter can only fully shift when high on emotion (if I remember correctly?) and I don't really understand why. And the fact that the flame didn't hurt Ezekiel at first and now it do? But I think that's it, and I don't have suggestion for now . Good work
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Dream-feather
@CrimmsonPetals Hey! Honestly so far I really like the series, the plot is slowly unveiling and the characters' development is interesting, be it Ezekiel, his family or Brandon. (and I like leopards hehe) . If something didn't make sense, I think that the answer are given later in the books. Maybe just the fact shifter can only fully shift when high on emotion (if I remember correctly?) and I don't really understand why. And the fact that the flame didn't hurt Ezekiel at first and now it do? But I think that's it, and I don't have suggestion for now . Good work
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