Dream_Writer16

We both lay on the couch of our living room and watch TV. You glance over at me and poke my cheek for the hundredth time. “What do you want?” I ask, annoyance dripping from each and every word.
          	
          	Your eyes narrowed into slits. “What do I want?” You chuckle, “You haven’t posted anything for like a month.”
          	
          	I looked away, “I have been busy.”
          	
          	“Sure you have,” You say sarcastically, “Doing what?”
          	
          	“It may be hard to believe, but, I have been quite busy and preoccupied. Life isn’t treating me too well."
          	
          	You nod, “Well, that is hard to believe due to quarantine. But, I trust you.” You flick my forehead. “Well, when are you going to post next?”
          	
          	I rub my forehead in pain. “First of all ouch and second of all,” I laugh nervously and slowly move away from you. “W-Well you see I was hoping to post. But-.”
          	
          	You glare at me with murderous intent and step toward me, “But?”
          	
          	I gulp and make a run for it. You yell and chase after me outside.
          	
          	“W-Wait! Hold up.” I say as I place my hands up in surrender. “We should not be outside! What if corona is air-borne.”  You nod in agreement and place your hand up in the air as well. You then give me a 10 second head start as we continue our chase in our house.
          	
          	We both paused around the dining table to catch our breaths, “ I was planning,” I huff, “to change the pov of my story to 3rd person.” I pant and end my sentence. 
          	
          	You look at me deep in thought. “Why do you want to change it?”
          	
          	“Well,” I take a seat, “I just don’t like the layout. I feel like I am too repetetive.”
          	
          	You take the seat in front of me. 
          	
          	“Plus…” I blush, “I suck at romance.”
          	
          	You look at my flushed face and laugh out loud, “Well throw me your best shot.”
          	
          	I smile and walk over to you for a hug. Sniffing the air around you I cringe, “Maybe you should take a shower it smells like corona.”
          	
          	You laugh, “Well that makes the both of us.”
          	
          	
          	-- So what do you think? Should I change the POV? Oh and stay safe everyone! Lol, I probably won't get any comments but oh well.

Dream_Writer16

We both lay on the couch of our living room and watch TV. You glance over at me and poke my cheek for the hundredth time. “What do you want?” I ask, annoyance dripping from each and every word.
          
          Your eyes narrowed into slits. “What do I want?” You chuckle, “You haven’t posted anything for like a month.”
          
          I looked away, “I have been busy.”
          
          “Sure you have,” You say sarcastically, “Doing what?”
          
          “It may be hard to believe, but, I have been quite busy and preoccupied. Life isn’t treating me too well."
          
          You nod, “Well, that is hard to believe due to quarantine. But, I trust you.” You flick my forehead. “Well, when are you going to post next?”
          
          I rub my forehead in pain. “First of all ouch and second of all,” I laugh nervously and slowly move away from you. “W-Well you see I was hoping to post. But-.”
          
          You glare at me with murderous intent and step toward me, “But?”
          
          I gulp and make a run for it. You yell and chase after me outside.
          
          “W-Wait! Hold up.” I say as I place my hands up in surrender. “We should not be outside! What if corona is air-borne.”  You nod in agreement and place your hand up in the air as well. You then give me a 10 second head start as we continue our chase in our house.
          
          We both paused around the dining table to catch our breaths, “ I was planning,” I huff, “to change the pov of my story to 3rd person.” I pant and end my sentence. 
          
          You look at me deep in thought. “Why do you want to change it?”
          
          “Well,” I take a seat, “I just don’t like the layout. I feel like I am too repetetive.”
          
          You take the seat in front of me. 
          
          “Plus…” I blush, “I suck at romance.”
          
          You look at my flushed face and laugh out loud, “Well throw me your best shot.”
          
          I smile and walk over to you for a hug. Sniffing the air around you I cringe, “Maybe you should take a shower it smells like corona.”
          
          You laugh, “Well that makes the both of us.”
          
          
          -- So what do you think? Should I change the POV? Oh and stay safe everyone! Lol, I probably won't get any comments but oh well.