Dreaminangel02488

I just posted Chapter 13 in my book! I would love some feedback as to what people think of my story.

memorium-

Thanks for the follow <3

shinxwriters

Hey anything you want me to improve in books...more length? More mystery? Suspense? Dark? Spice? 

Dreaminangel02488

@shinxwriters they could if they are too long and the material not interesting. But you have a great skeleton for a book, it just needs some meat on its bones in my opinion.
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shinxwriters

Actually I thought lengthy chapters get boring so I used shorter one but okay I m gonna make it lengthy 
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shinxwriters

Hey checkout new parts and tell me what kinda book you want troupes and all and checkout my insta.....my another book sin&silk