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Hey author!!!!! I an reading your story ''The wife he forgot to love'' and it's going in the right direction with the strong FL , but here is one thing that bothers me as I am not a fan of giving a chance to a cheater and thud does read the same so will you plz just tell me if she is going to end up with Adrian or not , because if not then only I will read the story because just imagine giving chance to a man who has make you bleed your love in the form of blood for years , who deliberately destroyed his own home , is simply not the one who deserves a chance at life , think as a woman , it must breaks a wife's soul to see her husband betraying her right infront of her eyes for years without feeling an ounce of guilt.....At first I thought maybe it will be some kind of misunderstanding but not Adrian is a coward , looser , boy who couldn't keep himself in his pants , who need validation or attention of so many women in life other than his wife to live his whorish ways , what proof will one have that he won't do the same in future what he did all these years if any other woman will come to seduced him , ofc he will do the same because if you can't respect your marriage , your child , your child's mother ,that is your wife who deserves the highest position in your life then acc to me you don't deserve HEA 
          Sophia and every woman who have suffered the same deserve a chance at true love and commitmentship of a REAL MAN..…..
          
          NOT OF A CHEATER , PERIOD!!!!

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