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I am making a Mystery/Thriller story and this will be my very first story actually. Could you please read, vote (if you like it) and comment your honest opinion? It's only four pages total. 

Writing Next Chapter right now, update possible sometime in winter break? :)

Read for read?

Updated! Read 'Accidentally Married' Chapter IX. =D

Expect a new update tonight! :D

hey jasmine! (love the last name hehe)
          just wanted to thank you for following me :)

So, it's story time. gather around children! 
          So in the beginning of the past few weeks of highschool was great and all but then there was this chick Maria who hated me and always ignored me. But being the dumb person I am, I always approached to her and tried to lighten her up. I thought she didn't like me because she found out I had a crush on her 'boyfriend' (i'm not even sure if they're dating) but then, yesterday, Wednesday I tried to talk to her like always and this time, she responded to me with. 'You're beautiful and have a positive mind. I'd be sure lucky if I would get to date you. M/N You're the sweetest girl I ever met, but I really don't think you should hang around me' 
          And I was just...wow. Of course I still tried to talk to her but yeah, I was surprised. 
          The End

Update to Profile.
          Weird...yet more professional?

You seem like such an awesome person and so i wanted to introduce myself! I'm Tina! :)

Can't stop staring at my profile and backround picture and I don't want to change the status. So here ya go, shank.