Tumble: This story was wonderful, it was short, sweet, deep, and was written entirely beautifully. There was something special about this story, I got a sense of reality that made the story even better. Although it was short, nothing was explained too fast. You have a way of writing that makes the story very relaxing to read. Because the story is short, you're not cramming it with plenty of drama, but let it go through the story with a natural feel. I also like how you started and finished the story because it makes it more earthy. I'm a bit afraid to read the sequels because I think you closed this "fairy tale" in an absolutely gorgeous, beautiful, magical and just simply perfect way!
But I will read it;) Good luck with all further writing!