DrewFrostStorm

Ok yall.
          	
          	Opinions needed on IF I fully reboot Extraordinary Minds. K?
          	
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          	Slice of Life Improvements:
          	
          	
          	ALSO SPOILERS! GO READ IF YOU HAVENT, THEN CHECK THIS!
          	
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          	Akira and Junpei are still orphans, but different circumstances. They were taken in by Yunas parents, so youll get to see that lore! Zenkichi is both their biological father, so. Yeah! However, Zenkichi went missing sadly after a shift due to Daisukes influence all as a means to lust after and get close to Yuna, to kidnap Akira and Junpei to study them for their talents and potential, especially at their ages. 
          	
          	Soon after Yuna died, the two were kidnapped and heavily drugged and experimented on to further indulge in the idea of what their talents would bring to a new world order. Of course, due to this. This obsession with wanting to understand where talent stems from, and at what age we show our biggest potential?
          	
          	
          	He starts to Mastermind differing branches of what hold our society together, and began placing differing talents under each branch and in what ways they could benefit each one. However, he starts to wonder even more. What would Ultimates with their talents do in a survival situation? A game of life or death, where the choice is at the hands of your fellow classmates?
          	
          	Thus, he falsely funded a new charity at Extraordinary Minds Academy called the Humanity Restoration Program. A Program for students of all kinds to bring forth their visions, their hopes, and their dreams for the future in a potentially future broken down world. With so many tragedies unfolding, the Academy accepts the donations assuming this is for a good cause. 
          	
          	What yall think? Ill slowly update more in the few days. 

DrewFrostStorm

Ok yall.
          
          Opinions needed on IF I fully reboot Extraordinary Minds. K?
          
          So.
          
          
          Slice of Life Improvements:
          
          
          ALSO SPOILERS! GO READ IF YOU HAVENT, THEN CHECK THIS!
          
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          Akira and Junpei are still orphans, but different circumstances. They were taken in by Yunas parents, so youll get to see that lore! Zenkichi is both their biological father, so. Yeah! However, Zenkichi went missing sadly after a shift due to Daisukes influence all as a means to lust after and get close to Yuna, to kidnap Akira and Junpei to study them for their talents and potential, especially at their ages. 
          
          Soon after Yuna died, the two were kidnapped and heavily drugged and experimented on to further indulge in the idea of what their talents would bring to a new world order. Of course, due to this. This obsession with wanting to understand where talent stems from, and at what age we show our biggest potential?
          
          
          He starts to Mastermind differing branches of what hold our society together, and began placing differing talents under each branch and in what ways they could benefit each one. However, he starts to wonder even more. What would Ultimates with their talents do in a survival situation? A game of life or death, where the choice is at the hands of your fellow classmates?
          
          Thus, he falsely funded a new charity at Extraordinary Minds Academy called the Humanity Restoration Program. A Program for students of all kinds to bring forth their visions, their hopes, and their dreams for the future in a potentially future broken down world. With so many tragedies unfolding, the Academy accepts the donations assuming this is for a good cause. 
          
          What yall think? Ill slowly update more in the few days. 

DrewFrostStorm

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Its fucking depressing how I can write great ideas in my head for Extraordinary Minds, but on paper? I get overwhelmed and just fumble the entire project. Everytime. Im tired of being the only one working on this project 
          
          
          Please stop telling me "Oh you can handle it alone! Youre so talented!"
          
          No the fuck im not! Thats your opinion and perspective, but for me its stressful and causing me serious health issues. 
          
          Everytime I even get help too from other sources, they insert their sexual fantasies into my characters and its absolutely annoying. 
          
          Like go make your own characters!!
          
          
          Let me make mine, and at the very least give me some pointers how I can make them effective and well written would be nice! 
          
          Sorry for the ramble yall, but. Im just tired. I know I need to swallow my pride and ask others for help sometimes, but at this rate. I hate spoiling my stuff, and want there to be a sense of surprise and shock. 
          
          If anyone can help though and is actually willing to? Ill consider reopening my discord for the sake of messaging n all. 

VycDarkshadow

@DrewFrostStorm I'm in the same boat with my own fangan series. Sometimes, I feel like you're the only one who reads it, or even cares that I'm writing it.
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DrewFrostStorm

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And keep in mind yall, I have SOME help but due to unfortunate events on some peoples ends- theyre unable to help at points. Which is reasonable! The world as is is completely fucked ._.
            
            But. Shit dude. All I ask for is some help in case I decide to continue Wars Unseen merely as a rough draft or I reboot this series in final draft form and go all out. 
            
            I want this to be memorable instead of a complete laughing stock at this point.  
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DrewFrostStorm

Extraordinary Minds is on indefinite Hiatus. 
          
          
          Any form of attempting to revitalize or continue it will be dealt with swiftly. Please respect my decision to prioritize my mental health, and especially the fact writing this has been stressful. I want to rework this myself, and make the series as consistent and as best it can possibly be for everyone, but. At this moment. 
          
          
          I just dont have the willpower for Fangans. If anyone is perhaps willing to help revitalize the series, and help me genuinely bring out its fullest potential? Itd be fantastic. 

VycDarkshadow

@DrewFrostStorm I know the feeling. Part of me isn't sure if I even want to write the finale of my four-book series at this point.
            
            Don't worry, though; I'm still here if you need anything, of course.
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DrewFrostStorm

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3 Announcements.
          
          
          1. I will be going back through Abysses Unknown and making some edits, as will I for Wars Unseen. Mostly because Ive realized the flaws in these, and how my motivations been dwindling as of late. I wanna also explore some more if that makes sense to some characters? Im not sure how or what ill do to make that happen, but. 
          
          
          2. I will be possibly returning to Discord, but just not making an EM discord. Im sorry, but given I have no Artists nor really anything for these fangans, I dont see the point for a discord other than promoting when a new chapter drops, and barely anyone sees it happened. However, I'll keep my account there (If I can even be assed to remember the damn details.) 
          
          3. Im helping write a Pokemon AU with a friend, aka proofreading, adding dialogue and scenario ideas, and. Quite literally attempting to lead a Fangan for a friend while theyre on Hiatus. So there is A FUCKING LOT on my plate. 
          
          
          
          
          Please understand if I seem stressed or a little distant, but going into the new year. I wanna try improving various things, including how I go about my personal projects, and ones I get myself involved in. Be it a Writer, A Voice Actor, or something else. 

DrewFrostStorm

Im slowly losing motivation to even continue Extraordinary Minds yall. Albeit with just myself doing not all but most of the work, topped off with life catching up like a damn freight train. Forgive me if some of the chapters feel all too short, or drawn out. I just wanna ensure my stories leave a lasting impact, and potentially become something bigger. 
          
          
          I absolutely would LOVE to bring a final draft to all these stories, via Instaronpas but. I cant draw and Im too broke to commission others for all the damn artwork for EVERY story. Albeit theres 5 but. Still. 
          
          
          I wanna see this series through to the end. However, I might need some help doing so. Ive also considered reopening Discord again, since Ive had to shut it down twice due to someone who cant take the hint with their stalking, and desperate attempts to turn my characters into their weird fantasies- 
          
          So if you wanna maybe become a proofreader, maybe help me ensure I write each chapter with the love and passion that once brimed with this series? Itd be vert appreciated! 

DrewFrostStorm

...I just also realized I misspelled some words and cant edit >_> FRICK- 
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DrewFrostStorm

Im sure nobody really cares but
          
          
          Extraordinary Minds is not over. Just taking my sweet ass time with next chapter ._. since yknow. Writers block. Getting tied up with Gaming.
          
          Have a Halloween challenge also coming up, so I wanna invest my time into said challenge for spooky month.
          
          However. I can safely say Ive made good progress on the next chapter! Im starting to slowly get more confident too with what I have so hope you guys are ready for the motive soon o_o 

Bomberman0210

@DrewFrostStorm That's awesome! I'm so glad you've been doing well while we lost touch!! ^^
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DrewFrostStorm

I apologize for new chapters taking their sweet ass time yall, but with how I wanna take Extraordinary Minds goin forward? Its causing me to slow down some ;~; that said. 
          
          If yall can spam votes on Wars Unseen, help them numbers climb.
          
          Well thatd damn well be the best birthday gift I could ask for  and itd help me out a ton! Especially with getting the story more attention.
          
          And also I should add Case 2 is takin awhile because I want to ensure I set up this case quite well!