So, at the start of your Murtagh fan-fic, it said something about Lorena meeting Murtagh. Then, you launched into the story with Eragon. What was the starting Prologue? Other than that the story part one and two were pretty good. Though, to be honest, I got pretty queasy when Lorena was Galabatorix's tool. But I did enjoy seeing a different view, while Eragon was with the Varden, and Murtagh was in the Capitol. Thanks! :)