
thatonechicc
Since you are one of the people who hate the cringy creepypasta stories out there, could you possibly take a look at my Jeff the Killer book? I just published it, and I'm wanting to get as much advice on writing as I can get, I don't want to end up making it the typical cringy love story that most fangirls do. You don't have to if you don't want to.

thatonechicc
@thatonechicc Yeah, i gave a hit as to why she keeps it on her, but it could easily be read over and forgotten. Thanks for reading it, I hope that I'd be able to get more feedback when the whole plot starts to actually start.
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DrownedByPain
@thatonechicc ah then that makes sense and yes, I like how you didn't write about a hand to hand fight because there would be no way for her to win and get out alive lol. Keep on writing
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