anajaems
Hi! I noticed you put my book in "sadly in 1st person". I can tell you that changes in the later chapters and I will edit the first chapters to 3rd person as yeah, they're quite awkward. Sorry if this bothers you, Have a good day/night - Kasmer
DrowningDevil
@kas_mer_ there's nothing to thank me for and I'll definitely look forward to reading it!!
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anajaems
@DrowningDevil don't worry, I didn't get offended at all. If anything, it motivated me to finally edit it because I switched to 3rd person in the middle of it anyway and there are some inconsistencies as well. I'll fix that and I'll post a notice so you can keep looking forward to that! Thank you btw
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DrowningDevil
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@kas_mer_ oml i didn't think anyone would ever actually like...notice me doing shit, I'm sorry if it offended you! It isn't meant to be bad....rather, that reading list exists for my friend to change them for me to third person in private so I can enjoy the story!! I really want to read it since it sounds interesting but I feel incredibly awkward reading first person perspectives regardless how good the writing actually may be so really it's just me having weird preferences !!
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