Dsven Alleus

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Hey y'all!
          
          Diary of Callahan The Great is published! Go check that out. I prefer critiques over compliments.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/891168557-diary-of-callahan-the-great-a-word-from-the-author

Sup? A quick notice for y'all. You may not see me so often from now on. Will be darn busy af!

Hey bro, remember me ? Brainly star ? Remember me ?

Hello everyone! I have an epic story in mind right now. It's an awesome blend of action, adventure, history, romance, thrill, mystery, horror, and whatnot! My challenge is describing the story in its best way possible... that includes choosing the right wordings and style. Also, I want to add character sketches in between the texts. For this, I might also need the assistance of an expert artist ;/ Along with that, also some friends to review the parts as I write. 
          
          Thanks for reading guys..

Till now it's really good . To be very honest  I found some gramatical mistake .. but that's not a problem until there is no confusion. But till now it's good. Keep it up young writer . I added to my library waiting for updates . Meanwhile can you too find  some  spare time to read my "Nancy" 

It isn't complete. I need some reviews regarding the beginning! ^.^ https://www.wattpad.com/story/158729698

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