DuckyandtheNut
Today I post the last chapter of my ONC story, Cloudfall. As my first foray into the world of science-fiction, it was an incredibly rewarding experience. If you decide to give it a chance, I'd love to hear your thoughts.
I do think there is more meat on the bone, so in the meantime, I'll dive back into Allis's story.
Real_nightman
@DuckyandtheNut The repercussions of your kind feedback on Wheels On Fire chapter 5 is here, sir.
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Real_nightman
@DuckyandtheNut It was 30k? While I'm taking my sweet time with just 22k or something ... <:) And as your first in scifi this was astonishing. I loved the deep lore and worldbuilding.
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DuckyandtheNut
@Real_nightman Thanks for saying this brief 30k felt quick ;) To be fair, I brainstormed a fair bit more to the story but my inability to keep it short and tight has me with far too many words! If I jump into the next arc, I’ll go over the 40k. So this version ends here! Hopefully with a fun cliffhanger for part 2 after the ONC is done. #wedontjustsurvivewethrive
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