Olivia

Can you please tell me your account for figment then?
          So I can follow you? :)

@RachelSymski  @EmilyLinette 
          Okayyy...all of a sudden i get all these comments about the figment thing....sooo i WILL check it out. And most likely join too!
          Thanks for reading my story and recomending a new website if i like figment.com i will probably end up doing that and wattpad or if i like it sooo much better then wattpad then i will prob just do the figment thing....anyway! Thanks so much!

Hey it's me again. I'm on a mission to convert you to figment. Seriously. Go now. We have Nutella.

You are a great writer, but instead of begging for reviews and comments here you should check out www.figment.com. Everyone there is super nice and supportive. We give constructive critism and love new members. The forums are great, plus we have Chumley and Nutella. Seriously, if you don't join I'll send Azzy out to get you, just kidding. Promise me you'll check it out though, kay?

Wow, you are mad talented. But to tell you the truth, I don't use my account much anymore. I made one for here and one for a site called Figment. The latter has won me over completely with its forums, format, and the users. Please convert! I would like to see more of you!

Hey your story is really cool! Check out mine on Figment, I don't have any one here so....
          
          Yea, what they said, check out Figment!.

Hey! I know WattPad is fun and all, but for more talented authors like ourselves, we should turn to Figment.com! I'm not trying to sound like I'm selling you anything, but on Figment there are tons of forum topics that you can reply to-even create your own! You can get better feedback on your stories, because people can "react" by clicking, "Laugh","Blush", "Wow","Cry", or"Shiver" to tell you how they felt when they read your story. Also, you can get reviews as well as comments, and there are super awesome groups where you can join and talk to other writers! I mean, on Figment, you can DISCUSS writing, how you write, why you write, and writing tips and skills, instead of just writing and reading stuff. Also, Figment even LOOKS cooler. SO, why don't you think about bringing your incredible writing to Figment, and I'll try to stop sounding so much like a real estate agent selling a house. XD

Yeah, and I'm just a little bit more *wacko* than them. 
          But, seriously. Join Figment. We're way cooler and we have Nutella and Chumley.
          Oh gosh.
          Savanna has Chumleyitis. Savanna says the Figgies know what she's talking about. Savanna says JOIN!

You seem like a writer with good potential. There's a really good writing site called Figment that you should go on. You'll get really good reviews and lots of good friends, too.
          And there's fun stuff like contests and word wars.
          And I promise, we are not advertisers; we'e just average Figgies.

I come from Figment. I'm here on a top-secret mission to convert you to a Figgy. Who told me to do this is strictly classified, but we're recruiting young writers with fantastic potential and whipping them in to shape on our wonderful sight. Thanks for reading, and join like your life depends on it.