Dullain

Just as @-Vellichor said below, atop advertising. You have been posting the link to your story and loads of popular books. It is extremely rude and disrespectful. You would absolutely hate it if someone constantly advertised on your story. Again, like Cat said below, actually get a good looking cover and make a good description. The reason your story isn't popular is because it looks like you wrote it as a joke. I don't mean to be offensive but you if you want people to read it, put more effort into it. Advertising will not get you any readers, it will only get you pisses off people. 

Please stop advertising your story everywhere, I understand that you're new to wattpad but it's very rude and I bet you're not even reading the other stories. If you want people to read your book update frequently, get a nice cover, write a good description and sign up for ad books and book clubs but don't advertise on other people's books. It's very upsetting for the author when they think someone is actually commenting on their book because they like it but it just turns out to be a story ad. 

Great story