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PearlyPegs

Wow thx for following me also I'm making a book about some girl who has powers and also a love life  and tbh it has nothing to do with bleach but at least I'm trying out my own creativity

DumplingSake

It’s good that your writing a story of your own. It’s going to take a lot of work, but I believe you can do it. I’d really like to read it sometime soon. ^^ good luck! :)
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ashlytaylor

Thanks for voting. I'm really glad that you took time out to read.

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DumplingSake

No worries. I enjoy reading. Besides, your story has me hooked though. It has such a great story line and everything. You did have a few spelling errors like: Then and than, or your and you're in some places, but for a beginner, you did amazing! Probably way better than I am ! But, I'll tell you this, "Show rather tell" my teacher always told me that phrase a bunch, yet I'm still trying to work with it more in my stories. In case you're wondering what I meant, it just means to express yourself creatively rather than being plain with you're story. But don't think you need fixing because I loved your story the way it is. Please keep writing more! I seriously can't wait to see what lies ahead of Kaira and what kind of celestial spirits her friend holds since all the golden gate keys have been found! Whatever you do, don't let anyone discourage you or anything negative get to you! Do your best! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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ashlytaylor

Hi Grimmkitty1, I've been reading your book and your a really great author. I'm just beginning and I'd really appropriate it if you could check out my book. I know I'm being really forward and it might be a little weird for me to be asking this of you but I truly do see you as a really good auther and I'd like your opinion, if you don't mind.

Isane_Unohana321

CN you read my bleach fanfic

DumplingSake

@Isane_Unohana321 @Isane_Unohana321 Hi. I'm sorry it took me a little longer to read your story, but I finally read it. It's a really great story. I don't think I have ever read a fan fiction of Captain Unohana and to be honest it was amazing. But one thing kept bothering me as I read along. In my opinion, (you don't have to listen or anything) punctuation seems to be a problem. Don't get me wrong or anything! I really don't want to upset anyone at all. I mean your story has a great story line to it, great characters and everything! But other than that it's a great story. Besides, I love your characters so much! I really am looking forward to seeing Sumiko and her zanpakuto working together as a team! I'm actually quite curious as to how strong Sumiko is! So please, keep up the good work! I really loved it!
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