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Hi!! I'd love to know your opinion on my poetry collection!!

Hello!!I’m hoping to grow as a writer. If you have a bit of time, would you mind reading my poetry book ( War Of Adolescence - narrative poetry ) and giving me honest feedback.

You've just found a lost diary. It belonged to a woman who loved someone who didn't deserve her. A love that led to self-destruction. Now, all these poems are in your hands. Don't read them aloud. Read them in silence as you relate your soul to each verse and each word written by the half-hearted woman — she loved too much, until love stopped existing in her.
          
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Hii!! It would mean a lot to me if you could check out my poetry collection Organized Chaos and give me some feedback please ❤️