Dustlesss
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A new poem was published, which took 6 seconds to read!!!! But there is a huge meaning in the poem!!! You should read it...
Dustlesss
New poem is published a few minutes ago!!!
Can you guys please read and comment?
I wonder what you think :") Thank you!
Dustlesss
Are you guys want to read my last poem? It's very liked on the allpoetry site!!!
SparrowMcWood
Thanks for the follow ! :D
Dustlesss
Hi guys! Are you ready for the new poem?
vishjay
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SparrowMcWood
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Dustlesss
I NEED HELP LAST TIME PLS
Which poem is better understood?
1. I CAN'T TELL YOU
I can't tell you
My heart was a sea ready to flood
The waves are getting grumpy
It touched my cheeks
You were spilled in piece
It's like... like... How do I know?
I couldn't tell
2.I COULD NOT DESCRIBE YOU
I could not describe you.
Yet, my heart was a sea ready to overflow
The waves got more and more peevish
They kept hitting my cheeks
You spilled in pieces
It's like ...like how do I know
I couldn't describe somehow...
Dustlesss
Hello dear readers! I mentioned before that I shared my poems in translation. Now I want to do a little survey. Could you please write which poem is more understandable?
1. YOU
Every when you came to my mind.
Your light is wrapping my heart
You know there's no shadow at all?
At all...
2. YOU
Whenever you come to my mind
Your light embraces my heart
And you know something? There are no shadows
None
Dustlesss
I NEED HELP
Hello dear readers! I mentioned before that I shared my poems in translation. Now I want to do a little survey. Could you please write which poem is more understandable?
1. LOST
It was the only deciduous leaf in the spring.
It never loved the burning sun or stubborn wind.
It never admired the stars or the rainbow.
It choosed not to love anything.
It never wanted to conflagrate or persevere
Also never ascribed a meaning to night or blob.
It let it self go. It percolated and landed on the soil.
It rustle was pretty thick
And it couldn't call autumn because it go lost.
2. LOST
It was the only leaf that spilled in spring
Had neither loved the burning sun nor stubborn wind
Had neither admired the stars nor the rainbow
It had chosen not to love
Neither wanted to burn nor resist
Neither to add meaning to the night nor the trace of water
Let itself go, glided and perched on the ground
With a silent rustle
Disappeared before it could call autumn
THANK YOU!