justingame44

Hey I'm looking for people to give me feedback on my stories and I was wondering can you please read my story and give me your feedback on what you think about it please it would mean a lot to me.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/251501125?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=justingame44&wp_originator=2QRQU2BthYLe7mQAVM4rjCRMxSY8wwqGRxu6EY5eBbtGYIUvkZmgHdE6KLn4MozfmbjawNC86p17VC%2F6n3zdrGIVu6R9yQuNnC%2F5aC8PzTz6ILSrd0Dg6s4HgZbgjiXi