DyiorBaby

What Celebrity Do You Want To Star In My Next Book?

DyiorBaby

I can most definitely I just have to think about what it’s going to be about
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brentluvrrr

can u make another fanum love story but its cute, smut involved
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DyiorBaby

Revamping Let Me Love You (Shikanaru) So Bare With Me As I Work On It And I'm Not Really Feeling Good That's Why It Might Take Me A Little While To Fix All The Mistakes And Make It Better For My Readers Plus I MIght Even Make It Longer And Give It A Proper Ending.

awgenization

hey! 
          
          i just wanted to let you know that your mafia fanum story is really going well but sometimes i have trouble trying to identify who’s speaking. so a little helpful tip i would say put each characters dialogue in quotation marks so it would clear up any confusion. but great work love ❤️!

awgenization

@TheOnlyDyiorBaby understandable, just write it like ‘he said’ or ‘kai spoke’ after putting my the quotation marks so it can more easier to do
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DyiorBaby

I know it’s a little confusing but for some reason it makes since in my head to write it like that I honestly didn’t think it would confuse my readers and I apologize for that
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DyiorBaby

Thank you for the feedback but most of the story is told in a third persons POV and if it has V.O. It’s a voiceover from one of the main characters and then it switches back to third person because it’s telling you what’s happening in that point of time but if you don’t see V.O. after the characters name then it’s in the present at that moment along with the third persons POV
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