@DylanMarkRobertshaw
Hey there! I'd love it if you could check out my short story 'Trapped Within'. It's just about three pages so it won't take up much of your time. I can promise you that it'll be an interesting and a different read.
http://www.wattpad.com/story/3831392-trapped-within
Thanks! :)
The earthbound chronicals were interesting to read!
@DylanMarkRobertshaw LOL it's alright ;) if it helps from now on try an just write without going back and fixing every little thing until it's done :) it makes you finish and when you're done lay it aside and read it over after a week for a fresh view ;) That is exactly what I have to do once I'm done. I'm not allowing any critique until it's done XD
@palenomian101 indeed havent got much into it due to attempting to fix mine but i like it@palenomian101
@DylanMarkRobertshaw Really? Thank you sooo much!!
no problem youve been a great help and your books pretty good so far @palenomian101
Thank you so much for the fan!! :D