DylanMarkRobertshaw

@palenomian101 indeed havent got much into it due to attempting to fix mine but i like it@palenomian101

TheBaldwinian

Hey there! I'd love it if you could check out my short story 'Trapped Within'. It's just about three pages so it won't take up much of your time. I can promise you that it'll be an interesting and a different read.
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/3831392-trapped-within
          
          Thanks! :)
          
          The earthbound chronicals were interesting to read!

_palenomian

@DylanMarkRobertshaw LOL it's alright ;) if it helps from now on try an just write without going back and fixing every little thing until it's done :) it makes you finish and when you're done lay it aside and read it over after a week for a fresh view ;)   That is exactly what I have to do once I'm done. I'm not allowing any critique until it's done XD