salsa_sauce_123

Dylant21

@salsa_sauce_123 I think your story is very cute, I hope that's not offensive. With english not being your first language you've done pretty well writing it so far. I don't have many critical thoughts on your story as I think you've done well and it's all about what you wanna write. It's not for me though. I hope this helps somehow, if not at least know that you have a lot of potential in writing.
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