Dyurne

Hello, everyone!
          
          Sorry to disturb you. I usually don't like making announcements, but I'll make an exception this time.
          
          There are two reasons.
          
          The first is that I have finally finished my fantasy trilogy made up of standalone diaries. 
          If you had gone back in time two years and told me that one day I would create something this huge and actually be happy with it... I wouldn't have believed you.
          
          So... if anyone wants to check it out, it's there XD
          
          The second reason is that I've finalized the details of my next story, and I've already started writing it.
          
          It will be a rather peculiar high school romance with both male and female POVs, set in Italy but without Italian dialogue or expressions to avoid alienating readers. 
          Only the locations and character names will be Italian, while still being easy for native English readers to understand.
          
          It will be my first romance-focused story, and since it won't be aimed only at men, I hope to get some much-needed feedback from women as well.
          
          The first chapter is already out, so if it sounds like something you'd enjoy, I'd really appreciate it if you gave it a chance. =)

For some reason, every time I try to respond to one of your comments today, it fails to post. Thank you for taking the time to respond back to my questions. I wish I could respond back properly.

Hi, me again! You probably don't recognize me on account of the new...well, account. But a couple weeks back you and I had an R4R arrangement, with my story being a Sonic the Hedgehog fanfic. I thought things were going quite well, until you put a comment on MY story saying I read through your last chapter too fast and didn't engage properly. Still curious what your source is for how fast someone can read a, what was it, 3k word chapter? I feel like the more mature response would have been to reach out in private, you had my reddit account, but no matter. In any event, I'm back, I will be uploading my stories again with some much needed improvements, and I'd be happy to pick things back up with a proper and more detailed arrangement, because your story about Virgil certainly was more engagement than the usual dark romance I see here. Toodles! 

I have a question for you or maybe a little bit of a collaboration on a chapter. 
          I noticed there is dwarven lore within your book. I want to bring in a certain dwarven element to a culture, but I'm kind of ignorant on how I would do that other than very surface level, Lord of the rings type things which are probably very stereotypical and overplayed at this point. 
          
          Here's the thought, outside of the orbit of the Galilean moons around Jupiter, there's a moon called Themisto, it's millions of kilometers in either direction from its nearest neighbors and its nearest neighbors are the moons you would most want to colonize on one side and on the other side the only moons in the system that have mineable ore. 
          
          So the Jovian people would like to turn the moon into a large false moon complex that is both foundry and shipyard. 
          
          I have already started them on this project and I've advanced time for 5 years to allow them to make their way to an almost completed space station type situation, but also to allow a little bit of a mining culture to develop. 
          
          Also, I imagine for logistical reasons that these are very likely geomancers. 
          
          They may also potentially be a cast of Angel known as Kerub (they're about 3 to 4 ft tall and have four wings distributed across their body, they're very good at dispersing heat and hovering like a hummingbird, but they're also typically able to discharge a large amount of chi at one time and have a tendency towards being better geomancers or serving on ships as a sort of additional capacitor system).

Hey! I just wanted to thank you again! Your tips were truly great, and I was able to implement many of them right away. So really, thank you again! I’m very happy that you read my story and helped me improve. 

@Lunaked no problem. =)

Hii V4V? 

are you up for a v4v?

@Dyurne wassup 

Hey !