EBGrey

I'm looking for honest feedback about the latest parts of my story Witch Hunter K. You may be familiar with the first version of the story, though I'm fond of it being the first story I had ever finished, I felt it was lacking in depth and detail. So I started again. I will be uploading a new chapter every Monday for the foreseeable future. I hope you will let me know wether I am on the right track or not...

EBGrey

I'm looking for honest feedback about the latest parts of my story Witch Hunter K. You may be familiar with the first version of the story, though I'm fond of it being the first story I had ever finished, I felt it was lacking in depth and detail. So I started again. I will be uploading a new chapter every Monday for the foreseeable future. I hope you will let me know wether I am on the right track or not...