Thedarkassassin01
Currently, your story is in number 5 in Bloodborne! Congrats man!!
EBIBIebida
Thedarkassassin01
I want to say this, you’re not gonna put the whole sports festival arc in one chapter are you? I’m just saying this just in case.
Thedarkassassin01
@EBIBIebida oh ok, I just don’t want to rush you or anything, take your time on what you put out.
EBIBIebida
@Thedarkassassin01 No, I don't plan to put the whole Sports Festival arc in one chapter. I haven't even finished writing the chapter before the Sports Festival yet... I think I'll be able to write the next chapter by the end of this month.
Thedarkassassin01
I’m a bit late of this but one thing I feel that has been left out is Class-1A’s reaction to Jaisen wearing the Hunter outfit as his choice of hero suit, so many of them can find his intimating of what it resembles especially when they were in USJ.
Thedarkassassin01
Hey, why did you change the title?
EBIBIebida
@Thedarkassassin01 It's okay! Thank you for pointing that out though, I hadn't noticed that.
Thedarkassassin01
@EBIBIebida Oh okay, I was just wondering if you made a mistake, my bad if I interrupted you or something.
Thedarkassassin01
Question: Can Class-1A see the messengers? If they can, how are they going to react to them if they can see them along with Jaisen interacting with them?
Thedarkassassin01
Ok that’s all I have for now, thank you for answering my questions and wish you luck.
Thedarkassassin01
@EBIBIebida Oh ok, thank you for answering that, I was just wondering if Jaisen still remembers Gehrman after he ascended to god hood. The fact that he will see some Mha characters as some people he remembers back in Yharnam, it would his character development grow as tries to do better than he was when he was in Yharnam.
EBIBIebida
@Thedarkassassin01 Yes, Jaisen remembers Gehrman. The reason he doesn't mention him is because he hasn't encountered anything related to or reminiscent of Gehrman in the world of My Hero Academia yet.
Thedarkassassin01
Let me be clear about this, Are you gonna make the story as like a God of War kind of style like?
Thedarkassassin01
@EBIBIebida Your welcome. I really enjoy your story and how it is structured. Also I want to compliment on your drawings because most people would use AI these days now so keep up the good work and I wish you good luck.
EBIBIebida
@Thedarkassassin01 Thank you for the explanation of the god of war story. Since Kratos and Jaisen have the same goal, I think the story will be structured quite similarly to God of War. Just as the atonement for the characters' past actions is an important part of My Hero Academia, the core of this story is how Jaisen faces the sins he committed in Yharnam and how he grows mentally and physically.
Thedarkassassin01
@EBIBIebida Now I know it sounds stupid, but it is what I think your are trying to do for this story.
LizziannaCancer5
Dude, gotta say, you’re story was very good. Not only do you write it but you also draw, that’s simply amazing. I’m eating good right now.
Thedarkassassin01
I briefly want to ask you this, what are your plans with Hagakure? Ever since Jaisen himself can see her with insight.
Thedarkassassin01
But that is your decision to make, and I think that maybe you can have Hagakure to be taught by Jaisen in the ways of a hunter. As well as making new ideas of her costume design. But that is my recommendation.
Thedarkassassin01
Thank you for responding, I know that it is not my of being, but I do feel having the Doll as the love interest doesn’t quite fit with me, basically because of Jaisen being a great one, she might’ve raised him when he was a baby squid Great One.
EBIBIebida
I'm busy studying at the moment so the next chapter will be posted late.
Zane114
I'm trying to follow you but I, having issues doing so
