MairaDawn

I wanted to first thank you for voting and feedback on Sanctuary's Aggression. I took note of your feelings of Jesse being forced to go to Ohio. That was actually a part of the story I hadn't gone over much, so it gave me an opportunity to do so. I ended up rewriting those chapters (45-47, the second ones. Those are the ones I hadn't reedited yet). Rather then make you reread them for the changes, I tell you the main changes. :)  Skye's father is frail. Jesse doesn't get as upset over leaving, and we get a clearer picture of why he is upset (he worries Skye's dad will encourage her to find a different home for him) and in the end, Skye gives him the opportunity to stay if he would like.  I hope you and other readers enjoy the changes. :)

MairaDawn

Thank you! I enjoy the feedback from the readers and I believe it helps me write a better story. :) I'm so glad you liked it enough to try the second book. I write almost every day so there will be a lot of storytelling coming up. :)
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EDITORYA

@MairaDawn i really appreciate the way you give time to read and communicate to your readers, there is only a handful of authors who does that. Looking forward to the 2nd book! And will definitely hang around to wait for new books in the future
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