Why hello there :D this is slyph silver and I've been reading some of your stories. You mentioned you wanted feedback so I thought I'd oblige :3 just thought I'd start with I think your stuff is well written, if a somewhat different writing style than myself. I, personally, do a lot of descriptive writing- long sentences and a lot of little details that honestly probably make my stuff too long but anyways. I think your stories are great, it's always good to write about stuff that is relatable/what you might personally understand. It makes writing pieces more impactful that way. In the way of constructive criticism I'd only be able to say maybe longer sentences, a bit more description in the pieces, obviously without changing your writing style. I, personally, get a lot of my writing influence from books I read. I've been a reading fanatic for ten years and authors like R.A. Salvatore, Terry Goodkind, and George R.R. Martin are definitely good references for me as a writer. Just getting references from certain writing styles that you like, and practicing with writing styles like it and making it your own is a good step in improving. I myself will often write the same few paragraphs of a story over and over again in different ways to get it just right, and even my writing has plenty of room for improvement. But I think your work is definitely on the right track :D sorry for leaving such a long comment, just thought I'd try to get all my maybe helpful thoughts out there :3
