I'm a 19 year old female Canadian writer. I've written short stories before, but this is my first real stab at doing a full length novel.  I appreciate all feedback, but ask, since I suffer from severe social anxiety, you please try to be kind. Encouragement is  appreciated. Let me know what you like, what you don't, and if you have ideas on where I should go with my writing, I'm open to any suggestions. In exchange, I promise I'll try my best to release a chapter every week.  I hope you like it. 

E.H. Graves

p.s. E.H. Graves is my pseudonym.  :)
p.s.s. If you like my work, tell others. Word of mouth is the most effective advertisement for a new author. Thanks.