Ootori_Shikikan

Hey mate, I saw your questions on Uriel page and I want to give you some advice, but note that I'm not a good writer myself but alas, I wanted to help a little bit.
          
          And sorry for not replying in Uriel's page since I think it would be inappropriate for me to do that there, so I go to your page.
          
          First of all, If you have anxious about your story fight it. You have to take a brave steps to post it and show to everyone about that concept you had, I have the same problem as you everytime  I want to post, but I came to realise that not posting anything or keep letting that anxiousness keep going wouldn't do any good to my progression. So yeah, Just posted it and face it.
          
          Secondly, It's about the 'Feeling in story.' you're talking about, to make a reader really feels the thing you want them to feel is... When you write you must keep thinking about those feelings, keep trying to feel that inside your heart and pour those feelings to your writing, that's the best advice I could give.

Ootori_Shikikan

@EIRascarf 
            
            Again, No problem. 
            
            If there's something you wanna ask about writing, feel free to hit me up on DM.
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EIRascarf

@Ootori_Shikikan Ah I get it don't listen to those types where the person says
            'Trash Story." Without saying the reason I get it thanks a lot man again thank you!
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Ootori_Shikikan

@EIRascarf 
            
            Yeah, like that or "Hey bro, I think it's to early for this to happen." And etc. 
            
            But ignore those who trash your story like "I hate this story." Or "This story is basically trash."
            
            Ppl like that will only bring you down.
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