EKGolem

So I wrote a new prologue for Her Last Breath… will someone read it for me?  I just want to know your thoughts and if it’s a good start that would get someone hooked.
          	
          	It’s a short read so even if you don’t have time to read the whole book, please just check out the prologue? ❤️❤️

acetylcholinee

@EKGolem yeah, sure, I’ll have a read later tonight (:
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EKGolem

@acetylcholinee if you have time and don’t mind? I’d love to hear your thoughts! 
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GoogleyEyes4Me

Wait did I miss something! What happened to your books? I hope you are doing well and if not don’t let negativity get you down because you are a strong human being inside and out! ❤️❤️

GoogleyEyes4Me

@EKGolem ohhhhh and you are welcome! Glad you responded and that you are doing well! I still hold hope for the future but most importantly I’m happy that you are happy! ❤️❤️
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EKGolem

@GoogleyEyes4Me thank you ❤️❤️ no negativity! I just gave up on the whole writing thing! 
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acetylcholinee

Hey! Haven’t heard from you in a while, I hope you’re doing well. I noticed your works are gone too. 
          
          I hope you’re ok x

acetylcholinee

@EKGolem Oh, why?! You’re a wonderful writer. I hope you decide to come back to it. I would love to know what happens to Aurora!
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EKGolem

@acetylcholinee hey! I’ve decided not to write anymore! Just not feeling it anymore! I hope you and your writing are doing well ❤️
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EKGolem

So I wrote a new prologue for Her Last Breath… will someone read it for me?  I just want to know your thoughts and if it’s a good start that would get someone hooked.
          
          It’s a short read so even if you don’t have time to read the whole book, please just check out the prologue? ❤️❤️

acetylcholinee

@EKGolem yeah, sure, I’ll have a read later tonight (:
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EKGolem

@acetylcholinee if you have time and don’t mind? I’d love to hear your thoughts! 
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EKGolem

Okay so much happens in Chapter Sixty-One of Her Last Breath...ahhhh.
          
          Some of my favourite quotes I've written are in this chapter.
          
          For example: "His touch evoked every feeling within her, breathing life into a frame that had long forgotten what it was like to feel alive and not hate every second of it."
          
          Butttttt for all the Ryder fans out there, please read. Even if you haven't read the rest of the book, I just want someone to be sad with.

Loversbook507

@EKGolem wasn’t ready for that hurt
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haileyastor6

@EKGolem you have no idea how scared I am
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Spencermon

@EKGolem
            *shoves bf out of the way*
            “Ryder babbyyy”
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EKGolem

Question for all the readers out there...
          
          Do you prefer to read books written in first person POV or third person?

haileyastor6

@EKGolem first person has always been my fave but lately I’ve been reading more third
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Spencermon

@EKGolem I think it really depends on my mood! I love first person pov because it makes me feel like I’m doing cool stuff but third person just flows so well
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EKGolem

Sometimes I feel like I put my characters through too much  I’m genuinely bawling my eyes out as I write 

Loversbook507

@EKGolem don’t tell me this I’m not ready 
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EKGolem

Hi friends ❤️❤️❤️
          
          I think I’m going to unpublish Her First Failure until I rewrite it. It’s confusing myself to have two different versions of it! I’m sorry if you’re in the middle of reading it, I promise to post chapter updates soon! But in the mean time please check out Her Last Breath :)
          
          Thanksssss 
          
          

Hitstacey

@EKGolem I came here purposely to ask about this. Okay then ☺️❤️
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Loversbook507

Just so you know I’m doing a reread of Her Last Breath bc I loved it sm 
          
          You write so beautifully and lay little hints throughout the entire work
          
          I’m terrified and excited to read it again after reading her first failure

EKGolem

❤️❤️❤️ this made my whole day! 
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EKGolem

So I’m rewriting Her First Failure, I added a prologue today, if you want to check it out please do :) if you’ve already finished the book and don’t want to go back it’s all goooood but I appreciate anyone who reads it
          
          Okay byeee