ENIALE_FLOWERS

Hey there!
          Totally sorry if this is out of the blue—I don’t know if you’re accepting reading requests right now, but I’d love it if you gave my book a chance. 
          
          If you enjoy it (even a little!), feel free to drop a like—and don’t hold back in the comments. Your thoughts and opinions truly matter, and I’d love to hear them! ✨
          
          Thank you so much for your time, and sorry for barging in like a surprise plot twist. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/401672468?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=lovebydesign

Hey Flower, just wanted to let you know that I checked your story, and I have the feedback that you asked for. 1: Punctuation, some of it is a little confusing and it's always good to give a good spell check. 2: Character details, I have no idea what any of the characters look like exactly. If you could explain how they look more, it make the story more vivid and emersive. 3: Setting: don't just tell me where their at, let me know what the hospital looks like, smells like, feels like. Is it sunny outside or cloudy? That's all I have for now, continue and I'll write back.