Hirokii_1

I would like to read the original book but it seems that I didn't suceed to find the creator of the original story then I recommand you to make a playlist and put the original story inside it so we read the story that inspired your story .
          
          ( Sorry for my bad English, I'm a French guy but I'm pretty decent speaking and writing your language )

ETRNITY01

@Hirokii_1 Hello there, You cannot find the Original Story in Wattpad, You need to use other platforms to read that. You can Search for "That Time I got Reincarnated as a Slime" in Google, then you'll be able to find where to read or watch it's anime that is available in your country. There are more than Dozen Light Novels, 48 Episodes spread over two season so, it may be overwhelming so you can just start with one of them.
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Twilightvalentine123

that time i got reincarnated as a High Elf time travel

ETRNITY01

@happymoses148 Well, it's just skeletons, y'know. I still have to fill the plot to make it happen. Can't just skip the contents and it's quite hard to write nowadays but it shouldn't take long once I enter the flow. I'll drop few chapters soon that will be the starting point but exact time, I can't say for sure. 
            p.s.  you are quite the dedicated person. I'm impressed.
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mnemoniac

Or Para:Slime?

mnemoniac

@ETRNITY01 hmm, I’ll see what I can do. 
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ETRNITY01

@mnemoniac Well, it is but have you seen my description. There is another story there so, I doubt anyone bothers to read there, that's why much of my readers come from the title, so if the title is also somewhat inconspicuous, then viewers will drop like flies. And I know what you want to say, "Change the description." but you see summarizing the description is harder than writing the story itself. You can't give away too much and just enough to keep the attention span of the reader to make their way to the 1st chapter. So the goal is to make reader go to the description, if possible, using the title then towards the story itself. Well, that's what I do when I want to read a story anyways, so I'm just experimenting with this and that. I'm trying things out on the platform but if you have any suggestion, I'd very much like to hear it.
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mnemoniac

@ETRNITY01 isn’t it the description’s job to be descriptive? It is kinda difficult to make a name that describes the book without making the name into a whole sentence. 
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Galaxygod342

Question is hirro absorb skill just another name so he can have a similar power two Rimuru or is it a weaker version along with the skills he uses or are they all the same just a different name

ETRNITY01

@Galaxygod342 Well, Hiiro was the average slime without any consciousness (or Ego) before Veldora named him so, we can see how much he has evolved since then. Thank you for the question. Have fun reading!
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Galaxygod342

Ok thanks I was curious he was named by veldora and as we have seen a monster being named can evolve or just make a skill better I mean monsters deage go from scrawny bodies to looking like a professional bodybuilder benimauru is a great example of skills getting better his oge flame became a hell flare
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ETRNITY01

@Galaxygod342 They are very different at the same time very close. First of all, Absorb is just an average skill that every slime out there possess in order to survive. It's just that Rimuru (& Hiiro) use it much more vastly because of their magic and so on, so it is similar in that regards but Hiiro will use it much less and more differently because he doesn't have gluttony or the Great Sage which are exclusive to Rimuru for now. Although, he will pass down his skills in the story  using the Food Chain skill but not yet.
            Hope this answers your question, if not do let me know. I'll be here.
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mnemoniac

For your fic, I was just wondering if a different name would be better, since it is very vague and doesn’t really stand out among the countless other Tensura fics, which is a shame since I think your fic is better than most. 
          I’m not sure what that new name would be since it’s your choice whether or not to rename it and what that name would be, but I was just letting you know. 

ETRNITY01

@mnemoniac Ha-ha. I can see why you would think that and I agree wholeheartedly. To be honest, this work was kind of a spur at that moment and not meant to be published at all. 
            Among few others of my personal works, this one was with the least potential because I had written nothing at all, so when I published it, I was thinking along the lines of "Whatever happens, happens." so I just put the first title I could think of.
            And also I have zero naming sense. So, I don't think I can come up with anything that would be worth the title at this point, but if you have some recommendations, do let me know.
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Galaxygod342

How do we find the story you recommend in your book is it on Wattpad or another site

ETRNITY01

@Galaxygod342 No Worries. Do let me know if you other questions though.
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Galaxygod342

@ETRNITY01  oh no I just had a brain fart moment and thought you were talking about another fanfic after you recommend to read the og story and didn't realise that you ment the manga
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ETRNITY01

@Galaxygod342 Well, I don't reference much and if there are some references, most of it would be from the Original Story itself as this is a FanFiction. And If there are scenes in which I recommend or reference something myself and not the original, I will have the source written down. If it's not there, it just means it's so popular I don't need to write it down.
            
            If you need something, do let me know specifically, I'll be happy to answer and resolve any questions you may have relating to this work or something similar. Thanks again. Have fun reading!
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