EW123456

Hey!!! So just uploaded a new book and i NEED feedback so please read and let me know whats good or whats bad. This is called Black over white. And is NOT racist. Its about faceless people a good side and a bad side. White = bad Black = good 
          	Again this is not racist not about colour as well.
          	Heres the blurb make sure to check it out:
          	In the village of Delament, there are two colours. And only one rule.
          	
          	Angel used to be pink and sparkly. Now she’s muddy, broke, and engaged to a boy she can’t stand.
          	 On the other side of the fence lives Blaze. Loud. Free. Everything Angel isn’t supposed to want.
          	
          	They’ve been talking through a hole for years.
          	 One mistake changes everything.
          	
          	Suddenly they’re glowing.
          	 Suddenly there’s a timer.
          	 Suddenly the old stories about a forgotten colour don’t feel like stories anymore.
          	
          	In Delament, some things are forbidden.
          	 Some things are cursed.
          	 And some things... are worth breaking the rules for.
          	
          	Black over White is a story about secrets, timers, and finding home in the wrong place.
          	 About being told who to love.
          	 And choosing anyway.
          	
          	───
          	
          	Author's favorite book line: “Stories are only stories. ...Unless they aren't.”

DandyDandy

@EW123456 | I'm glad that you enjoyed it, also don't worry they'll be a sequel! :D
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EW123456

Hey!!! So just uploaded a new book and i NEED feedback so please read and let me know whats good or whats bad. This is called Black over white. And is NOT racist. Its about faceless people a good side and a bad side. White = bad Black = good 
          Again this is not racist not about colour as well.
          Heres the blurb make sure to check it out:
          In the village of Delament, there are two colours. And only one rule.
          
          Angel used to be pink and sparkly. Now she’s muddy, broke, and engaged to a boy she can’t stand.
           On the other side of the fence lives Blaze. Loud. Free. Everything Angel isn’t supposed to want.
          
          They’ve been talking through a hole for years.
           One mistake changes everything.
          
          Suddenly they’re glowing.
           Suddenly there’s a timer.
           Suddenly the old stories about a forgotten colour don’t feel like stories anymore.
          
          In Delament, some things are forbidden.
           Some things are cursed.
           And some things... are worth breaking the rules for.
          
          Black over White is a story about secrets, timers, and finding home in the wrong place.
           About being told who to love.
           And choosing anyway.
          
          ───
          
          Author's favorite book line: “Stories are only stories. ...Unless they aren't.”

DandyDandy

@EW123456 | I'm glad that you enjoyed it, also don't worry they'll be a sequel! :D
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EW123456

Hey guys!! Im gonna take a break from posting the chapters. I have a baunch of assessments i need to get done :)

DandyDandy

@EW123456 | I wish you luck on your assessments!
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