Hello my friend thank you for following hope u enjoy reading my book am not a pro but my tip for you is simple write the way you want to as time goes on you feel you can change this to this making it sound better read you book every so often I say often because the more you read a chapter the more it sounds the same but if you come back to it your mind see's it different if it sounds good or bad so you get new ideas , remember writing is an art form , and like any artist you need inspiration, and join a lot of awards contest you will see why when you do , and finally have fun