EbonyGreenXxxX18

feedback? I'm new to this and I'm pretty shy about my writing. Anything I can improve on? https://www.wattpad.com/story/217697493

EbonyGreenXxxX18

Okay! I am so sorry I haven't updated my story still! I know, I know. So it is my mission to post a chapter tonight! Ya'll hear me! tonight! If I don't, ya'll can smack me as much as ya'll want.
          
          The reason for my absence is I haven't been feeling too well. Idek why, but my depression just decided to be a even bigger bitch than usual. So I am sorry, but I will do my best to post an update tonight.
          
          Okay! *pulls everyone into a bone crushing hug* I LUBS CHU!!! ♡♡♡ *kisses your cheeks* AND PEACE OUT BITCHES!!
          
          
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EbonyGreenXxxX18

Hi everyone, I'm sorry that I didn't post an update last night; I was really busy, but I'm back now so I will post an update today even if it kills me. Also thank you for commenting and voting on my stories. It's nice to know that people enjoy my writing, even if my writing is crap in my eyes. So thank you for that, and again I'm sorry.
          I LUBS CHU!! <3 <3 <3
          
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