Ash_not_amused
not gonna lie the quote Urbosa gives on fear and sorrow was clever
Ebony_McCloud
@ash_not_amused If it makes you feel better, I probably spent more than two minutes coming up with it
Ash_not_amused
un, hey man your stories are good. keep up the good work. now if you would excuse me I'm trying to think of a good plot for my next chapter in my book
SushiCultist
There is no turning back after reading this, but trust me, it will put a smile on your face. Every night, someone thinks about you before they go to sleep. At least 15 people in this world love you. The only reason they would ever hate you is because they want to be just like you. There are at least to people in this world. That which would - - for you and those who would not. You mean the world to someone.
Someone you dont even know exists loves you. ♥
Make the biggest mistake ever, someone good comes from it.
When you think the world has turned it's back on you, take a look. Remember all the compliments you have received. Forget those rude remarks. So, if you are a loving friend, send this to 15 people including me. Something good will happen between 12 am, and 4 pm. It could be anywhere, so be prepared ♥. If you break this chain, you will be cursed with relationship problems for the next 20 years. Send this to 15 people in 15 minutes. Make someone's day. Make people smile!
You are loved. F. R. I. E. N. D. S. = fight for you =respect you = encourage you = need you = deserve you = save you ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
HiImInHellWithYou
Hello Sidon!
Http-EggsBenedict
OMFG, HOW DO YOU NOT HAVE AT LEAST 1000 FOLLOWERS?!?!?!?!?! YOUR FANFIC IS SO F**KING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
Ebony_McCloud
@Http-EggsBenedict Well thank you much! While my following here is pretty small, my following on Fanfiction.Net is slowly but steadily approaching 1K. At any rate, if you want to read any of my other works (some of which are one-shots that take place after CoaFA) you can check them out on FF.Net. Thanks again!
JoseGabrielSiles
Hey Ebony! I love your fanfic. I’ve been reading it for a month now and it’s really fun. A good “make it or break it” point for me personally in fanfics to keep me invested is the characterization. Even when the premise is bland or sometimes terrible I find some enjoyment of the whole package if the characters are written as accurate as in the original source material. Needless to say, you soared miles over that aspect.
BOTW has a simple story to begin with, so when you put the champions alive and well with stronger personalities than little mute Link it all depends on their interactions to hold this going. Those were my thoughts before I started reading the first chapter, but you nailed it instantly after I saw how Daruk accidentally knocks Link and Revali to one another. And then when sassy Urbosa came in, it only got better. Yup, I knew I was in for a fun ride
Seriously, love this stuff. It’s amazing how many cues you took from the few cutscenes featuring these characters in the game and expanded on it so well keeping it consistent. And that was even before the Champions Ballad had come out! You really know how to writes fully fleshed out characters and know the right ways to make them bounce off one another. I commend you.
Ebony_McCloud
@JoseGabrielSiles So, I just noticed strange gaps in chapter 17 that have the word undefined in them. You wouldn't happen to know what causes that, would you?
foxxothedoggOO
Yo Ebony! I've been reading your Champions of A Fallen Age fan fic and it's absolutely BREATH TAKING! IVE NEVER LOVED A SERIES LIKE THIS IN A LONG TIME AND YOU ARE DOING WONDERFULLY! And I am so excited to see what's in store for the next Divine Beast.
Ebony_McCloud
@foxxothedoggOO I noticed that when I was checking over chapter 17, there are weird gaps with the word "undefined" in them. What's even odder, at least to me, is that they don't appear in the app. Do you have any idea why that would be?