Ebooksheep

Merry Christmas! I'll be posting a rewrite of Season 11.5 at 8:00 EST. If you want to check it out, be my guest. 
          	
          	Enjoy the holidays!

Ebooksheep

After spending about 5 hours editing, I have finally finished fixing all spelling errors (yay!). However, I have tweaked a couple of things, and I shall list summaries of the biggest changes here. If you haven't read 11.5, then I recommend you not to read this.
          
          A: The little girl who was 'injured' when the ninja was captured was Muskrat's daughter. This was the same girl which caused Zane to turn to sadism (Yes I said it),  and the girl who later introduced the inductee. If I recall correctly, I never said her name. (Note, this isn't Merriweather).
          
          B: In one of the chapters, there is an explanation as to why Zane fights better. I forgot the specific chapter number, but it is when Zane is about to meet Kenya, Gavin, Trystan, and Juliet for the first time. 
          
          C: The weapon Zane wields is a Kusarigama, and he wields it to avoid his friends connecting the dots. The kusarigama Zane wields has the same description, but I personally like to think of it as one similar to Kai's own in Kung Fu Panda 3.
          
          D: There's a bit more clarification as to when Garmadon formed Yulta, and it was prior to before he was banished. Garmadon had seen Chen's downfall, and created the organization in an attempt to relieve the rampant villains in Ninjago (E.x.: The mechanic who appeared in season 6, and other seasons). If I did not re-write this in other chapters, let me know :D.
          
          E: Otherwise, I don't believe I changed anything too major, so I bid you all goodnight.

Zanefan123

can we get other stories with Azne/Zane if continuing the stories?
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Ebooksheep

Oh sure! Azne (or Zane .-.) has white hair in a different style, but with black highlights at the end. He wears a light blue jacket and has on dark blue jeans. He literally wears his weapon like a bracelet, with the daggers falling off to the side. The rest of his chains drag behind him. You'd probably mistake him for a guy in his twenties.
          
          Maybe I'll do art on him and the rest of the gang.
          
          Just maybe...