I JUST REALIZED THAT I DIDN'T DELETE THOSE THREE PARAGRAPHS TvT
I was editing at midnight, and I was so sleepy that I didn't see the same three paragraphs at the end TvT
But yes, that's how I edit my chapters XD
If I don't like how it sounds, I'll rewrite and add some stuff and flair until I finally like it. (so embarrassing you all had to see that TvT)