Ecstasy94

I just tried to edit my other work, "Pleasure" and i couldn't even make it through it, it was so terrible... or maybe I'm tired either way, it sounds so child-like and I don't know if i should keep it. So, I need advice followers... should I delete or keep "Pleasure" 
          	K  for Keep
          	D for ...Delete Lol.
          	Inbox away!
          	
          	
          	ORRRR.. I can hand the story off to someone else, who would like it. You can change, delete, improve whatever... its yours now. Let me know if you're interested.

Ecstasy94

I just tried to edit my other work, "Pleasure" and i couldn't even make it through it, it was so terrible... or maybe I'm tired either way, it sounds so child-like and I don't know if i should keep it. So, I need advice followers... should I delete or keep "Pleasure" 
          K  for Keep
          D for ...Delete Lol.
          Inbox away!
          
          
          ORRRR.. I can hand the story off to someone else, who would like it. You can change, delete, improve whatever... its yours now. Let me know if you're interested.

Ecstasy94

its been forever!
          I've matured and went back to edit ALL parts (from "Stepdaddy"), from grammatical errors to whole paragraphs. (hint: ch.5) Please, i welcome all input. Now that i have more free time i can progress the story even more. Tell me what you guys want!